रूप-अरूप: उदास चांदनी

Wednesday, March 12, 2008

कुछ इस तरह

हमारे दि‍ल में

उतर जाती है

गोया

सीने में

कोई नश्‍तर

हौले से

चुभा दि‍या हो

कि‍सी ने

अमिताभ मीत said...: बहुत अच्छा है.; Wednesday, March 12, 2008 1:17:00 AM
mehek said...: bahut khub,ek tis uthi dil mein.; Wednesday, March 12, 2008 10:05:00 AM
Unknown said...: वाह!!; Wednesday, March 12, 2008 10:47:00 AM
अजय कुमार झा said...: bahut kam shabdon mein bahut jyaadaa gehree baat , hamesha kee tarah.; Wednesday, March 12, 2008 11:36:00 AM
Anonymous said...: fantastic!!!; Thursday, March 13, 2008 8:34:00 AM
Keerti Vaidya said...: amazing....; Monday, March 17, 2008 1:03:00 PM
Vivek Ranjan Shrivastava said...: व्यापक संभावनायें है आपमें ....; Monday, August 11, 2008 10:07:00 PM
MEGHA SHARMA said...: Umdaa likha hai apne...shabdon ka sahi taal mail hai bilkul!; Saturday, December 17, 2011 8:05:00 PM